Friday, November 13, 2009

Storywriting

Last week we read a story about a toy gorilla that came alive in the middle of the night. We enjoyed it so much that we decided to write our own stories.


Last night something amazing happened. I woke up and saw my Lego police truck came alive. I said "Yikes!" But then I calmed down, hopped in and it drove me to the movies. We saw Up. After it went to the beach. I said "I'm hungry now". It drove me to McDonald's. Finally we went home. I woke up. I said "Truck?" Then I shouted "Truck!" But then I noticed it was all a dream.
Joel

Last night something amazing happened. I woke up and saw my toy kangaroo alive. He was noisy all night. I couldn't go to sleep. He felt soft and fluffy and cuddly. In the morning it was quiet.
Aliya

Last night something amazing happened. I woke up and saw a giant pink teddy. We went to the park together. And at the park we had a picnic. And it was so much fun. Then we went to the shop. Then we looked around. We felt happy. Then we went home and it turned back into a real toy.
Yaren


1 comment:

drongo said...

Wow! It's hard to keep up with all the good work you people get up to. These are excellent original stories! Congratulations to "Aussie of the Month" Jacob, and that woodwork 'incursion' was written up very interestingly by your resident reporter.

I wonder what else you'll pack in before Christmas is upon us?!